The light blue sky was being invaded by fluffy dark clouds. The emerald green sea looked so far and distant. Waves broke into white foam on the beach. A small island in the corner is the only thing that makes this scene seem real.
First of all, I thought your use of "invaded" was quite creative. I also like your use of "far and distant" while describing the sea, which is quite a creative way to describe your perspective.
Secondly, I really hoped to see your description of the beach, because it was quite a significant part of the picture. You could describe the fact that it was "coarse shade of light olive" if my memory of the picture was correct :)
Hi, Ming Fwu here.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I thought your use of "invaded" was quite creative. I also like your use of "far and distant" while describing the sea, which is quite a creative way to describe your perspective.
Secondly, I really hoped to see your description of the beach, because it was quite a significant part of the picture. You could describe the fact that it was "coarse shade of light olive" if my memory of the picture was correct :)